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EPIC RAP BATTLES OF HISTORY!

CELES CHERE, TERRA BRANFORD & RELM ARROWNY!

VS.!

TIFA LOCKHART, AERIS GAINSBOROUGH & YUFFIE KISARAGI!

BEGIN!

(Celes)
I am the Magitek Knight Celes! I can defeat you three especially this floozy barmaid!
As none of you three can stand up to my Runic Blade.
I am easily the superior warrior here by far!
Not to mention I actually have musical talent as I was once an Opera Star!
(Terra)
I am Terra and I am not sure if I should be here and maybe I am bit too docile.
As unlike most of you ladies here I prefer not to be hostile.
But I do believe that Humans and Espers can have peace with one another.
As I have a Esper Father but I also have a human mother.
(Relm)
Oh I do wish we can give a bunch of nasty monsters a good slaughter,
Instead of dealing with this Lesbian Couple and their bratty daughter.
As I am Relm the cutest little artist with lots of artistic skill!
Watch as my amazing drawings would often go for the kill!
(Terra)
Relm! You don’t know Tifa and Aeris so you shouldn’t give them such a judgmental rile.
Besides there is nothing wrong with having an Alternative Lifestyle.
Oh Celes I do understand that this may come off as a bit of a tattle.
But are you sure it’s appropriate that we brought Relm to this Rap Battle?
(Celes)
Oh I understand your views Terra as your concern does seem to be rather just.
As I, Celes Chere, shall defeat this floozy barmaid who relies on her oversized bust.
I mean after all Tifa your outfit is rather obscene.
However your flower giving compatriot is not entirely clean.
(Relm)
Oh I can be here just fine you two, though Celes yours raps do give me a bit of a surprise.
I’d thought you and Tifa would get along, you both have some things in common such as your bust size.
After all you two, men love to leer at your boobs especially when you two wear a certain dress.
But when comes to taste in men, Celes has a bit more success, right Celes?

(Celes’ face goes a little red as she glares at the gleefully grinning Relm while Terra tries to calm her down.)

(Tifa)
Well Celes I can easily make your “Holier-than-though” points rather moot.
As why am I getting lectures from a busty blonde running around in a swimsuit?
While it’s true that you’re Runic Blade can absorb any magic in this place…
But it won’t save you from a good grapple or a solid kick to the face!
(Aeris)
Oh calm down you two this doesn’t have to lead into bloodshed.
Now how about we get some flowers or perhaps a drink instead?
Oh you two wish to glare at each-other? Oh dear…
Times like this do make me wish that Zach was here.
(Yuffie)
Oh lighten up there Aeris these Rap Battles are suppose to be all in good fun.
After all when it comes to FF Lady Trios we are Number One!
Though Tifa you sure you want to argue with Celes whose boobs are bigger and greater?
Alright but don’t blame me if certain fans ship you with Celes later.
(Tifa)
*sigh* Oh this is starting to remind me of when certain fans ship me with Scarlet.
And to those fans NO I am not her personal sex-slave harlot!
Oh what is it with me and blondes…
Uh what I mean is Cloud and I have a truly great bond!
(Aeris)
Oh come now Yuffie we both know how Tifa feels about Cloud so there’s no need to bait her.
After all it does seem like Cloud will return her feelings back… well okay several years later.
However Celes you seem to still have some issues you need to resolve first.
As your “Haughty Ice Queen” persona still seems to be a bit well nursed.
(Yuffie)
So sorry you FF6 has-beens! We FF7 girls know how to perform!
Though I hope we don’t get attacked by Ms. Moody Green’s “Alternate Form”.
But still, I alone can out-rap and out-attitude the whole three of you.
Say little Miss Relm, are those rumors about you and Gau true?

(Now all 3 of the FF6 ladies look a little shocked, particularly Relm whose face is now bright red. But now we see Rosa, Rydia and Porom from Final Fantasy 4 on stage.)

(Rosa)
Rydia and Porom, you both are here? Alright then, cool.
Alright then girls, let’s show them all something a little more old-school.
We are the ladies of Final Fantasy 4 just so you all know.
I am Rosa, White Mage Extraordinaire, and I have exceptional aim with my bow.
(Rydia)
Alright Miss Rosa, I am Rydia, a Summoner from the village of Mist.
I can summon some powerful monsters that should never be dissed.
But summoning monsters is not the only part of my magical power.
As for example I can give you all a good ice shower!
(Porom)
Hello folks, I am Porom, the young Mysidian White Mage.
Both Rydia and I look up to Tellah the Great Sage.
My brother Palom and I can use powerful spells that can give monsters something to fear.
Though some things considered I’m kind of glad that Palom isn’t here.

[However Palom was nearby with the Eblan Prince Edge as Palom gleefully watches Rydia dance while Edge feels slightly uncomfortable. Though Rydia then does a little twirl in which she now turns into a fully grown and voluptuous young lady in which both Palom and Edge like what they see.]

(Adult Rydia)
Now I can summon a bunch more monsters that can fill up a large ship.
Not to mention I am also pretty good with a whip.
Seriously my various spells can destroy a bunch of foes in no time flat.
I may not be able to heal anymore but Rosa and Cecil more than make up for that.
(Porom)
WHAT?! What the… this is so blatantly unfair!
How come Rydia gets to suddenly grow up and show so much flair?
Alright calm down Porom there is no reason to be so easily riled.
But still how come I get to be stuck as a small child?
(Rosa)
Oh please calm down Porom, it’s not all that bad.
There’s a… long… and strange reason why Rydia is like this, so please don’t be mad.
But still girls let’s stay focused on our plans here in this musical scene.
As I am Rosa Farrell and I will be Baron’s Future Queen!

(Now we see Lulu, Yuna and Rikku from Final Fantasy 10 making their entrances on the stage.)

(Lulu)
Alright Ladies I am trying to make a point here, but I won’t be too incessant.
If you insist on bringing children here then at least make sure they are a bit more adolescent.
While I admit it is true that my body and robes can make even some of you ladies blush.
But it matters little as I can defeat you all with my various spells and my Cactuar Plush.
(Rikku)
Well, well it looks like our trio is not the only one to have a mage with a giant rack.
However style and beauty is certainly something Yuna and I do not lack.
The 3 of us can easily handle monsters of all sorts.
While in FFX-2, Yuna and I so rock the mini-skirts and short-shorts.
(Yuna)
Oh I wouldn’t say “rocking it but I did dress a bit more loose in Final Fantasy X-2
But I am still a summoner at heart at least that much is true.
Like my late great father Braska I shall become a fine priest.
I can summon many Aeon creatures to help us slay any vile beast.
(Lulu)
Well said Yuna, I can assure you that your words will become true.
But I do apologize that I wasn’t able to join you and your friends in X-2.
With all due respect to Wakka but I had to settle down.
However, my new ensemble would’ve probably shown more skin than my old gown.
(Yuna)
Oh it’s alright Lulu I understand, though I must say that my journeys have made me feel more gallant.
By the way Ms. Celes you are not the only one here with some musical talent.
Oh yes, that reminds me… oh dear…
Oh Rikku we should’ve asked Paine to join us here.
(Rikku)
Oh don’t worry about Paine there Yuna, I’m sure she won’t mind.
Besides even if we asked little miss Ice Queen Paine, she probably would’ve declined.
But what can I say? I’m sure we’ve won this little musical brawl.
Now c’mon you two lets watch Tidus and Wakka play a little Blitz Ball.

(Last but not least the ladies of Chrono Trigger namely Marle, Lucca and Ayla show up.)

(Marle)
Hey everyone, we are the ladies of Chrono Trigger!
Your chances of getting beat have just got bigger!
I am pretty with a crossbow and my magic can put my foes on ice.
I maybe a future queen but I’m no Ice Queen, in fact I’m normally nice.
(Lucca)
The name is Lucca and I am the Brains of this Team.
As I can easily blast you all with a fiery beam!
With all my gadgets, blasters and bombs I suppose I am a bit of a tech-nerd.
But I assure you one should never use that term as a curse word.
(Ayla)
I, Ayla, I can beat any Dinos with fists and a Club.
Also Ayla likes to chow down on a lot of grub.
Ayla really likes any Strong Man and Woman in sight.
Oh hello Tifa, we sure had some fun with Tina Armstrong last night, right?

[Then Tifa looks away, slightly red in the face as she twiddles her thumbs with Aeris looking a little surprised as Yuffie is smirking at Tifa there.]

(Marle)
Boy Ayla you do kind of get around do you?
But I guess it doesn’t matter as long as you’re my ancestor so far that seems to be true.
Perhaps I shouldn’t act so preachy and snooty.
After all I am also quite the shapely young beauty!
(Ayla, now fondling Marle)
Oh Marle you say you are Shapely Beauty do you?
Then let Ayla see if that is true.
Marle’s body not too bad but as you can see.
Marle have good figure but not compared to me.
(Lucca, annoyed)
Really? Is this really necessary I mean I don’t want to tattle.
But don’t we have enough Yuri fanservice in this Rap Battle?
After this, I’ll be back in my lab fixing up Robo, just so you know.
However if Marle and Ayla are busy perhaps I should spend some time with Chrono.

WHO WON?!

WHO’S NEXT?!

YOU DECIDE!

EPIC RAP BATTLES OF HISTORY!
ERB FF6 Ladies Vs. FF 7 Ladies
Hello folks here is my 30th Rap Battle and I decided to try a little something different namely a 5-rapper battle but in this case a 5-Team battle. As this rap battle is using many of the ladies from Squaresoft namely...

Celes Chere, Terra Brandford and Relm Arrowny of Final Fantasy 6
Tifa Lockhart, Aeris Gainsborough and Yuffie Kisarage of Final Fantasy 7
Rosa, Rydia and Porom of Final Fantasy 4
Lulu, Yuna and Rikku of Final Fantasy 10
Marle, Lucca and Ayla of Chrono Trigger.

This one is of course my longest Rap Battle but I thought I try a little something different here.
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Well folks I have finally done a little something I have been meaning to do for a while now and make another TV Tropes to one of my works and believe it or not its a page for my Epic Rap Battles and its here at...

tvtropes.org/…/pmwiki.ph…

Oh rest assured I am well aware that its not finished at all but this took me a few hours to do and I figured this would be a nice start. I will also try to add in a characters sheet for this in the near future as well. Although if any one of you who is a frequent TV Tropes user and is familiar with my Rap Battles feel free in helping me out with this page if you like. Oh yes and I will also try to make TV Tropes pages for some of my other stories as well.

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EPIC RAP BATTLES OF HISTORY!

TINA ARMSTRONG!

VS.!

TIFFANY LORDS!

BEGIN!

Tina:
Howdy y’all, name’s Tina & when it comes to Wrestling I am the Real Deal!
Why when it comes to Dead or Alive I am the original Boobs of Steel!
I can deliver powerful slams in the ring and on the beach some great ball serves!
Oh yes and my body is well known for having all the right curves.
But hey you too have curves in all the right places.
It’s a shame that your boyfriend is kind of a racist.
You’re quite the cute and sexy little cheerleader so you have some right to boast.
Too bad the game series that you came from had two games at most.
But hey, I gotta say that rapping with you is rather fun, hun.
You do have potential young lady but I am Number One!

Tiffany:
Hi everybody, I’m Tiffany and when it comes to Cheerleading I am First Rate!
The only DOA first that your known for Tina, is the first lady whose not Jail-bait.
I am great at boxing, kicking and delivering a good cheer!
Perhaps I can even try to out grapple you here.
You’ve tried to be a Model, Movie Star and even dabble in politics; can you make up your mind?
Sadly, when it comes to plot relevancy your series hasn’t been so kind.
I mean when it comes to plot importance, you’re Dad & most of your friends leave you in the dust.
This is why you’re mainly known for being an American Blonde with a Big Bust.
Hey I can’t complain as I am also a pretty blonde with a gloriously huge rack.
But with my boxing gloves on I can come in for the attack!

Tina:
You got some nice spunk honey but like I said I am Number One!
Shame we couldn’t get folks like Rainbow Mika or Tifa Lockhart here for even more fun.
So you want to grapple me in this battle of rhyme?
Oh honey you can be my new Tag Partner anytime.
I’m like a mix of DC’s Power Girl and Rogue from the X-Men.
This is why when it comes to Sex Appeal I am way hotter than a Cayenne.
But you don’t need to look so down hun, why things aren’t so bleak.
If you like hun, next time we can do a little “Team-Up Technique”.
We can soon see whose strength and stamina is greater.
Well hun, after this want to have some fun later? *wink*

(Then Tiffany is a bit shocked with a blush.)

Tiffany:
Wha?! Eh… So its Mind Games is it? Is that the best you can do?
Ah man it looks like those rumors about you and Lisa and Mila are probably true.
This kind of reminds me of Lucy and Cana from Fairy Tail….
But anyways, I will be the one to prevail!
Yeah I know Roy can be pretty insensitive but he is not really a bad guy.
I know he’ll become a kinder, more tolerant man as the years will go by.
Though I can’t help but notice that for a Rap Battle this isn’t all that mean.
Granted this Rap Battle is not exactly clean.
But what the heck, I suppose we can end this Rap Battle this way.
As we all give a good cheer to the U.S of A!

WHO WON?!

WHO’S NEXT?!

YOU DECIDE!

EPIC RAP BATTLES OF HISTORY!
ERB Tina Armstrong Vs. Tiffany Lords
Here is another one of my ERBs and this one is my Post-Independence Day ERB and this one stars Dead or Alive's Tina Armstrong Vs. Tiffany Lords from the Rival Schools series.
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EPIC RAP BATTLES OF HISTORY!

MARTY MCFLY!

VS.!

BILL AND TED!

BEGIN!

Marty:
Seriously guys, I am up against Bill & Ted?
I think I’d probably get smarter lyrics from that box of Lead.
You guys call yourselves Wyld Stallyns? Oh please!
I can out-guitar both you dopes with the greatest of ease!
Trying to sit through your short-lived Franchise can be such a Bogus Journey.
While I have one of the biggest franchises in 1980s history!
I can rock out to Chuck Berry and I got songs from Huey Lewis and the News.
You idiots still think your Rock Stars, yet after this you two will be singing the Blues.
Besides my gal Jennifer does deem me to be quite the lover.
Winning this Rap Battle will be easier than Bill’s Step-Mother.

(Ted)
Gosh, Marty there is no need to be so rude.
(Bill)
Yeah why are you so cranky man? Is it because you’re such a short dude?
(Ted)
We use our Time Machine to go through Time to see History’s biggest Successes.
(Bill)
While you only use yours to fix you and Doc Brown’s many messes.
(Ted)
Our Band may not be huge but our music has given History some joy.
(Bill)
After all we are the Wyld Stallyns, you’re more like an “Angry Chicken Boy”.
(Ted)
Say Marty what are you saying about Bill’s mom? Wouldn’t Jennifer get mad?
(Bill)
Heh Marty was never much of a Hubby to Jen and that’s just sad.
(Ted)
So trust me Marty when it comes to your Movies we are not so slow.
(Bill)
When it comes to pleasuring someone’s mom, you’re a real pro!

Marty:
You morons shouldn’t anger me. Why? Well because…
I can easily take down this Neo Has-Been and the Wintery Never-Was!
So you two idiots still use your goofy “Surfer” voices I see.
Hey geniuses you guys are not Mikey from TMNT!
But hey perhaps I shouldn’t be feeling so much stress.
Over these losers who are trying to cash in on my success.
Oh don’t look at me like that you Doctor Who wannabes you both know it’s true.
Besides I have Skate Boards that have more Brain Cells than the both of you.
So bring it on, you Brain-Dead Chumps!
Call me Chicken again and you two will get some Black Eyes and Lumps!

(Ted)
Wow Bill, Marty sure gets awfully violent when he gets mad.
(Bill)
Yeah Ted, are we sure Biff is not his real Dad?

(Then we briefly see Marty’s mouth gape in shock as his left eye twitches.)

(Ted)
But we’re obviously not scared at all just so we’re clear.
(Bill)
Yeah we took on Lewis and Clark, we can easily handle Stuart Little here.
(Ted)
After all when it comes to Time Travel we Wyld Stallyns know how to thrive!
(Bill)
Say Ted, you think we should do a little performance in 1955?
(Ted)
That could be cool Bill but we shouldn’t pick on Ol’ George McFly.
(Bill)
That’s true Ted, George maybe quite the nerd but he seems to be a decent guy.
(Ted)
Alright Marty, we know someone who will make you feel like quite the Doofus.
(Bill)
Time for the Wyld Stallyns to leave the stage, take it away Rufus!

(Then Rufus comes in from his Time Travel Phone booth.)

Rufus:
Greetings boys, perhaps it is time for me to join in on this Musical Fight.
Though I must say you boys have shown a keen amount of insight.
But look at Marty’s comments here so ill-tempered and snide.
Sadly Marty has yet to learn his lesson regarding Pride.
Whenever someone taunts you, you want to punch them in the jaw.
One day you will see that is your most fatal flaw.
Don’t get me wrong Marty I know that you’re a good boy alright.
Although Marty you do have a slightly compulsive tendency to fight.
You also have a lot of other issues that are easily detected.
This is probably why your movie’s script was at first frequently rejected.

(Then Doc Brown makes his stylish entrance with his Time Travel DeLorean.)

Doc Brown:
So you’re all ganging up on Marty huh? Is that how this is going down?
Well then it’s time to even up the odds, here comes Doc Brown!
Great Scott! I can easily out-rap the three of you!
This Rap Battle will be way easier than the one I had with Doctor Who!
You think this mellow G-Rated George Carlin can beat me in this battle of rhyme?
I am one of Christopher Lloyd’s most famous roles of all time!
Not to mention how my Franchise is the bigger and better one by far.
I can easily smash your little Phone-booth with my Time Travelling Car.
So come on Marty lets go, after all we’ve defeated these fools in every way.
But don’t worry you three; I’m sure that your 3rd movie will come out some day.

WHO WON?!

WHO’S NEXT?!

YOU DECIDE!

EPIC RAP BATTLES OF HISTORY!
ERB Marty McFly Vs. Bill and Ted
Well folks here is my latest ERB and this one is for Marty McFly from Back to the Future who is going up against Bill & Ted from Bill & Ted's Excellent Adventure. (Oh yes and Doc Brown and Rufus from Back to the Future and Bill & Ted respectively also appear.) Here is my Pre-Independence Day ERB that is made in honor of the fact that today is the 30th Anniversary of the original Back to the Future movie..
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Say folks I am thinking of making a new TV Tropes Page for one of my works like how I did a while back for one of my Disney's The Weekenders​ fanfics a while back namely "A Glimpse Into The Future" here at...

tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php…

So far I am thinking either doing one for my Epic Rap Battles of History​ or my series "Takahashi Trifecta". (I also considering one for my Neo Geo Saga series but I am not sure if it has enough to warrant a TV Tropes​ page yet though.) So what do you folks think? Which of my works should be the next to get a TV Tropes page?
Hey folks I know its a little late but happy 2015, here is my first Journal entry for the year. Remember a while back when I said that I was going to do episode summaries of future episodes of my Takahashi Trifecta series? Well here they are, I admit I did originally say I was going to give you a summary list of episodes 11-20 but since this was taking long than I originally anticipated I went with 11-15 instead. I was writing down highly detailed summaries for myself (which I felt uncertain about doing long summaries at first but then I figured it would be for the best). But not too worry folks I will of course give you folks some shorter summaries of these upcoming episodes. But first for those who are unaware of my Takahashi Trifecta series or haven't read all of my episodes yet you can take a look here at...

pokejedservo.deviantart.com/ga…

Anyways here is the episode summaries...

Episode 11- Its the day after Ikuko's welcoming party in Episode 10 and the folks at Maison Ikkoku are wanting to relax. Godai has a nice little man-to-man chat with Ryouga as Godai tries to be supportive to him. (In which Kyoko overhears Godai's chat with Ryouga and thought it was nice until she hears about who does Godai have feelings for then frets about it as she heads back to her room.) Then Ryouga confides with Godai that he has a certain secret as well. Kentaro tells Ranma how the party they were in yesterday was fun. But there was something that Kentaro and Ikuko were curious about yesterday namely who is that red-haired girl with a big Panda bear who was seen in some of the pictures with the Tendo sisters in the Tendo family album. Meanwhile later on that day as the adults of Maison Ikkoku were at the Chachamaru Shun Mitaka shows up and asks Kyoko out in which she felt a bit overwhelmed and uncomfortable. Mitaka was then informed about how Kyoko recently became a widow in which Mitaka gave Kyoko plenty of sympathy, understanding and support. (In which Mitaka and Godai even have a little debate about the fact that Kyoko still has trouble letting go of her late husband Soichiro and what she should do about it.)

Episode 12- This will be Kozue Nanao's debut episode. But first things first this episode will begin with Ranma and Ukyo having a little chat as Ranma is nervous about the fact that Kentaro has seen pictures of his "other self" Ranko and wonders what to do about it. While Ukyo understands Ranma's dilemma she does try to tell him that it would really be for the best to be more open and honest to Kentaro. Meanwhile a little later on that afternoon Godai finally has the courage to go ahead and try to ask Kyoko out on a date but he was too late as she was getting dressed and ready to go on a date with Shun Mitaka. Naturally Godai feels a bit disheartened by this until he meets Kozue Nanao a cute short young lady who goes to the same university that he does. The two had a pleasant idle chat until she noticed the movie tickets Godai has in his hand in which he invites her to come with him in which she gladly accepted. Though while Godai and Kozue were on their way to the movies they ran into Kyoko and Mitaka as the latter couple were having a little bit of car trouble. Godai was rather nervous about this awkward situation while Mitaka was rather amused while Kyoko was confused. (In fact Kyoko spent most of her date with Mitaka wondering what is Godai doing with this young lady and believes that something about this is not adding up.) But while Godai felt nervous about the idea of dating Kozue he does actually enjoy the date and while he claims this changes nothing about Kyoko he admits he would like to see that Kozue girl again.

Episode 13- Earlier that day in Furinkan High, Ukyo, Akane and Nabiki were having a chat about a few issues. Namely how Ukyo is trying to encourage Ranma to tell Kentaro about his Jusenkyo Curse and that Godai is dating this girl by the name of Kozue. Meanwhile at Sanryu University Sakamoto has heard that Godai was on a date last night and asked Godai about it. Though they did run into Kozue in which Godai did at least have enough time to introduce Sakamoto to her since she had to get to class. Then Sakamoto teases Godai in which he went from pining for a cute babe like Kyoko to a cutesy little munchkin like Kozue in which Godai was a little annoyed by that. But a little while later Godai notices that a pretty young woman with long dark hair has been pursuing him and is kind of intrigued yet creeped out by that. But as soon as he tries to confront this young woman she reveals to him that she is Sayoko Kuroki and she is trying to recruit him for the school's Puppet club in which Godai was surprised but he accepts. (In which a little later on that day he finds out that Kozue just recently became a new member as well as they get to see what the Puppet Club is like.) However a little later on that day most of the Puppet Club members play a little prank as they call Maison Ikkoku asking for Godai in flirty voices as Kyoko gets increasingly annoyed by this. Then Kyoko frets about this as she wonders how many girls are Godai seeing and does that girl Kozue know about this? But rest assured Godai does explain this situation to Kyoko later. Oh yes and in this episode Ranma and Ukyo do sit Kentaro down as they try to explain to Kentaro about Ranma's "Jusenkyo Curse" problem and try to get him to understand.

Episode 14- This episode also starts in Furinkan High as Ukyo, Akane and Shinobu have been talking about whats been going on lately. Then they found Megane's lackeys Perm, Kakugari and Chibi and asked them what were they doing here. While Megane's cohorts were rather nervous about that (especially when Ranma came in and wanted to interrogate them) they claim they haven't been doing anything wrong lately and don't know what Megane has been doing lately and left. Then Ataru casually walked in and greeted Ranma and the ladies and asked what was going on. Then a mysterious young man came flying in a sci-fi flight suit who calls himself the Great Cyber-Man whose presence must be a shocking sight to behold. Until Ataru quickly pointed out that its just Megane in a cosplay suit in which Megane is infuriated that Megane sees through his disguise so quickly. But then Megane brags about how he has made his new cybersuit from tech that he borrowed from Mendo industries and is now picking a fight with Ranma and Ataru in which Ranma gladly obliged. While Ranma was definitely able to get some hits in Megane's suit was surprisingly durable as Megane is not out of the fight yet. However the fight does get an intervention by Shuutaro Mendo and Tatewaki Kuno, the former being annoyed at Megane for stealing some MendoTech as Megane has no intention on giving Shuutaro's family any credit for the tech.

Episode 15- Godai was out on another date with Kozue in which she was fascinated by these stories that Godai has been telling her about life at Maison Ikkoku and wants to visit him. While Godai is a little uncertain about it at first but does agree to it and tells her that she will get to visit. Meanwhile the next day Kozue gives Godai a surprise visit earlier that afternoon but finds out he is not home but is then approached by Hanae as she invites Kozue in then introduces her to Yotsuya and Akemi. Their little meeting does go pretty at first until the trio start cracking jokes about what Godai is really like as the spineless dope that he is. Then Akemi started mocking Kozue about her body and is surprised that a pervert like Godai would even go for a short flat-chested runt like Kozue. Akemi kept harassing Kozue long enough until she started to tear up a bit in which Yotsuya got a little nervous and Hanae actually felt a little remorseful. But Akemi got really defensive about her behavior until Kozue screamed in frustration on how Godai is not some shallow pervert. But Soun overhears some shouting going on at the Ichinose residence and demands and explanation from the trio on why is this girl crying. Then Soun apologizes to Kozue about the trio's behavior and gives her some money for some lunch and tells her that he will make sure that Godai knows that she was here when he gets back. Later on that day Godai is back home and was told about what happened to Kozue earlier today and is furious at the trio for how they treated her especially Akemi. While Hanae (and to a lesser extent Yotsuya) do apologize about the incident Akemi is incredibly annoyed by this as Godai calls her out on her shallow callous nature. But then some of the others at Maison Ikkoku do suggest Godai to give Kozue a chance a nicer visit at Maison Ikkoku in which he does agree to it. In which at the next day Kozue does visit Maison Ikkoku again in which Godai makes sure that this visit will go a lot better this time.

So folks what do you think? I am also thinking of starting a radioplay out of this series by sometime this year. I admit I am not entirely sure whether if I should wait until I get these episodes done or not but still what do you folks think?            
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